royalty
you, my dear
are royalty
even on days like this
when your heart
is hollow
your soul still spreads
golden and glowing
across the fields
on days like this
the grass must still bow down
the world
kneels at your feet
as its sun
passes
moving
these simple blades and stalks
under the caress
of your eyes
as if blessed
are royalty
even on days like this
when your heart
is hollow
your soul still spreads
golden and glowing
across the fields
on days like this
the grass must still bow down
the world
kneels at your feet
as its sun
passes
moving
these simple blades and stalks
under the caress
of your eyes
as if blessed
posted by Yes at 11:08 PM
13 Comments:
Oh what a wonderful tribute to the human spirit Firebird. I love every single verse in this. Beautiful.
Beautiful, my dear
Let the spirit that fills the poem fill every human heart and uplift the souls, my bird
i feel so blessed to have you -- with such a fine poetic heart --as my friend, my dear :)
love,
devika
Your gentleness and gifted way of writing always feels like a caress...
Janice--thank you so much--your comments always touch my heart...
Devika--such inspiring words, you are a blessing indeed!
Lorraine--thanks for feeling it--and may it stay with you always...
and should I say that "as you are to me" again, my dear? :)
really look forward to more and more of your poems, dear bird
love,
devika
It is touching and heart melts.
You moved me, Firebird!
Royal!
Devika--thanks, I'm blushing now...
Krystyna-- LOVE your comment so much!
hi firebird, i just finished printing out the divorce papers i will sign today... feeling very heavy and heart shattered, i came to your blog for some comfort...
all i can say is wow! what healing you are to the universe... you are the queen of hearts! big hugs, snowsparkle
Snowsparkle--glowing in the sun...
I can relate to how you feel--shattered hopes, dreams, relationships--that's been heavy on my heart too...
You made my day with your comment--I am so honored to think that my poem helped you!
May a new day bring you away from the pain, and into a beautiful place--it will happen soon!
Hang in there, ss--I'm with you...
as always - beautiful and profound.
Bird--thank you for the gift of your loving comment--as always!
"under the caress
of your eyes
as if blessed"
I like the near-rhyme and the overall sound as well as sense...
Paul--Gosh, I don't think I noticed the near-rhyme...you have an eagle-eye for these things!
Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it--and your visit, too!
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