Wednesday, April 22, 2009


you, my dear
are royalty

even on days like this
when your heart
is hollow

your soul still spreads
golden and glowing
across the fields

on days like this
the grass must still bow down

the world
kneels at your feet
as its sun

these simple blades and stalks
under the caress
of your eyes

as if blessed


Blogger Janice Thomson said...

Oh what a wonderful tribute to the human spirit Firebird. I love every single verse in this. Beautiful.

Wednesday, April 22, 2009 at 11:34:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika said...

Beautiful, my dear
Let the spirit that fills the poem fill every human heart and uplift the souls, my bird

i feel so blessed to have you -- with such a fine poetic heart --as my friend, my dear :)


Thursday, April 23, 2009 at 1:07:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Lorraine said...

Your gentleness and gifted way of writing always feels like a caress...

Thursday, April 23, 2009 at 12:09:00 PM EDT  
Blogger firebird said...

Janice--thank you so much--your comments always touch my heart...

Devika--such inspiring words, you are a blessing indeed!

Lorraine--thanks for feeling it--and may it stay with you always...

Thursday, April 23, 2009 at 3:15:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika said...

and should I say that "as you are to me" again, my dear? :)

really look forward to more and more of your poems, dear bird


Thursday, April 23, 2009 at 11:53:00 PM EDT  
Blogger krystyna said...

It is touching and heart melts.
You moved me, Firebird!

Saturday, April 25, 2009 at 6:15:00 AM EDT  
Blogger firebird said...

Devika--thanks, I'm blushing now...

Krystyna-- LOVE your comment so much!

Saturday, April 25, 2009 at 5:13:00 PM EDT  
Blogger snowsparkle said...

hi firebird, i just finished printing out the divorce papers i will sign today... feeling very heavy and heart shattered, i came to your blog for some comfort...
all i can say is wow! what healing you are to the universe... you are the queen of hearts! big hugs, snowsparkle

Saturday, May 2, 2009 at 11:41:00 AM EDT  
Blogger firebird said...

Snowsparkle--glowing in the sun...
I can relate to how you feel--shattered hopes, dreams, relationships--that's been heavy on my heart too...
You made my day with your comment--I am so honored to think that my poem helped you!
May a new day bring you away from the pain, and into a beautiful place--it will happen soon!
Hang in there, ss--I'm with you...

Sunday, May 3, 2009 at 12:20:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Bird said...

as always - beautiful and profound.

Sunday, May 3, 2009 at 4:10:00 PM EDT  
Blogger firebird said...

Bird--thank you for the gift of your loving comment--as always!

Sunday, May 3, 2009 at 8:31:00 PM EDT  
Anonymous Paul Maurice Martin said...

"under the caress
of your eyes

as if blessed"

I like the near-rhyme and the overall sound as well as sense...

Saturday, May 9, 2009 at 7:00:00 PM EDT  
Blogger firebird said...

Paul--Gosh, I don't think I noticed the have an eagle-eye for these things!
Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it--and your visit, too!

Saturday, May 9, 2009 at 10:46:00 PM EDT  

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