forever love
I know
you are
your own forever love
here
take your hand
those gentle fingers
I've seen open
like a flower in bloom
when your heart is full
and your soul stops reaching
for scattered roses
in the road
do I
need to say
that the sun will not rise each day
without your eyes
and that your every step
is a dance
your feet following each other
forever
in love
you are
your own forever love
here
take your hand
those gentle fingers
I've seen open
like a flower in bloom
when your heart is full
and your soul stops reaching
for scattered roses
in the road
do I
need to say
that the sun will not rise each day
without your eyes
and that your every step
is a dance
your feet following each other
forever
in love
24 Comments:
Gosh Firebird I love this piece - it has a special meaning for me. Thank you for sharing this touching poem.
lovely, my dear bird
forever love -- if all of us stood for that, so wonderful the world would have been :)
love,
devika
Janice--I'm so glad it touches you in a special way--perhaps our lives are similar somehow--I like to imagine that...
Devika--so let's start a world movement, OK?
I love your recent posts on Certain Kind of Woman, and Abstract Deductions--can't comment there, so I am telling you here.
(by the way, the link in the night shining clouds post goes to the wrong place--you can use this one:
http://www.sciencedaily.com/
releases/2007/12/071210112002.htm
I am always ready for that, my dear :)
Thank you so much for letting me know, my dear and thanks for the link too :)
wishes,
devika
Devika dear--make sure you get the entire link--I had to post it twice because it cut off the last part the first time.
Okay, my dear..I got it. thanks a lot :)
devika
How loving you are...ssweet, sweet lady
Devika--you're welcome--any time!
Lorraine--thank you for your loving comment...much appreciated...
thanks so much, my dear :)
devika
Beautiful! Lovely poem to read on the first day of spring!
Mark--lovely to see you here, thanks for your kind comment!We are surely celebrating spring today--even though at the very minute that it became spring this morning, a sudden snowstorm came down from the sky! Luckily, it didn't last all day...
Lovely poem, lovely read!
Thank you so much, dear Firebird!
Krystyna--thank you so much!
I will forever be in love with Spring.And, your words that touch the chords of my own harmony.
Thanks, Pat! Hope that cloud warms up--now that it's Spring, you know...
I think that cloud needs some redecorating.
Pat--If you need some happy colors for your clouds--
type in "mountain sunrise" in the search box at the top left of my home page--(it's in my archive)
Take as much as you want!
helloo my dear,
its been a while I reached here...i used to take the link from Kai's page or a follow up comment...now she removed the links...and I miss the sequence...and only today I saw you propping up :)
anyway, no new ones??
Hope the clouds are warm/coloured and I get to see you with a new poem ;-)
I am a bit dried up for ideas...or is that I have too much to mislead the readers...anyway, I am on a short break :)
wishes,
devika
Devika--Just now I was looking at your "Essential Me" blog, and I love the poems you poated by Anna A.--
Also I was re-reading your post on CKW (conversations?) It is so fascinating...shedding light on your mysteries.
I have not been writing lately--my life has become complicated--but right now I am determined to get back to normal. Maybe tomorrow?
Thanks for being a wonderful friend!
Complications in life -- we all seem to have it in intervals...infact its become so common for me..and now, when things are too normal, i get to feel a bit uneasy :))
anyway, nice to know you found those posts interesting....and when some one say I am mysterious I feel confounded...to me I seem so simple...a forever love kind as you say here! :)
i'll be here tomorrow, my dear..
love,
devika
just came checking, my dear
hope things are fine with you...will come later
wishes,
devika
Devika--If you were simple, (as you are not!) you would not have so many deep and interesting things to say...
I know just what you mean about "feeling uneasy when things get too normal" I always take that as a sign that an earthquake of some sort is about to happen in my life--as well it should.
Just posted something new--thanks for keeping after me to write!
Okay, i fully leave it to you my dear...
But I thought my thoughts were the simple ones that affect a very normal human mind...but yes, I am bit too sensitive..though I may show otherwise :)
I read in Woolf's diary..that she often desired for something very intense that would keep her insane mind well absorbed...
earthquake...tearing off homes...oh no! a storm is okay :))
wishes,
devika
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