Sunday, March 15, 2009

forever love

I know
you are
your own forever love

here
take your hand

those gentle fingers
I've seen open
like a flower in bloom

when your heart is full
and your soul stops reaching
for scattered roses
in the road

do I
need to say
that the sun will not rise each day
without your eyes

and that your every step
is a dance

your feet following each other
forever
in love

24 Comments:

Blogger Janice Thomson said...

Gosh Firebird I love this piece - it has a special meaning for me. Thank you for sharing this touching poem.

Monday, March 16, 2009 at 10:02:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

lovely, my dear bird

forever love -- if all of us stood for that, so wonderful the world would have been :)

love,
devika

Monday, March 16, 2009 at 10:56:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Janice--I'm so glad it touches you in a special way--perhaps our lives are similar somehow--I like to imagine that...

Devika--so let's start a world movement, OK?
I love your recent posts on Certain Kind of Woman, and Abstract Deductions--can't comment there, so I am telling you here.
(by the way, the link in the night shining clouds post goes to the wrong place--you can use this one:

Monday, March 16, 2009 at 11:47:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

http://www.sciencedaily.com/
releases/2007/12/071210112002.htm

Monday, March 16, 2009 at 11:50:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

I am always ready for that, my dear :)

Thank you so much for letting me know, my dear and thanks for the link too :)

wishes,
devika

Monday, March 16, 2009 at 11:50:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika dear--make sure you get the entire link--I had to post it twice because it cut off the last part the first time.

Monday, March 16, 2009 at 11:52:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Okay, my dear..I got it. thanks a lot :)

devika

Monday, March 16, 2009 at 11:56:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Lorraine said...

How loving you are...ssweet, sweet lady

Tuesday, March 17, 2009 at 7:00:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--you're welcome--any time!

Lorraine--thank you for your loving comment...much appreciated...

Tuesday, March 17, 2009 at 8:46:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

thanks so much, my dear :)

devika

Tuesday, March 17, 2009 at 8:51:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Mark said...

Beautiful! Lovely poem to read on the first day of spring!

Friday, March 20, 2009 at 1:58:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Mark--lovely to see you here, thanks for your kind comment!We are surely celebrating spring today--even though at the very minute that it became spring this morning, a sudden snowstorm came down from the sky! Luckily, it didn't last all day...

Friday, March 20, 2009 at 7:04:00 PM EDT  
Blogger krystyna said...

Lovely poem, lovely read!
Thank you so much, dear Firebird!

Sunday, March 22, 2009 at 10:26:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Krystyna--thank you so much!

Monday, March 23, 2009 at 6:43:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I will forever be in love with Spring.And, your words that touch the chords of my own harmony.

Wednesday, April 1, 2009 at 9:45:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Thanks, Pat! Hope that cloud warms up--now that it's Spring, you know...

Friday, April 3, 2009 at 10:58:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I think that cloud needs some redecorating.

Monday, April 6, 2009 at 7:49:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Pat--If you need some happy colors for your clouds--
type in "mountain sunrise" in the search box at the top left of my home page--(it's in my archive)
Take as much as you want!

Monday, April 6, 2009 at 9:39:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

helloo my dear,

its been a while I reached here...i used to take the link from Kai's page or a follow up comment...now she removed the links...and I miss the sequence...and only today I saw you propping up :)

anyway, no new ones??

Hope the clouds are warm/coloured and I get to see you with a new poem ;-)

I am a bit dried up for ideas...or is that I have too much to mislead the readers...anyway, I am on a short break :)

wishes,
devika

Monday, April 6, 2009 at 9:55:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--Just now I was looking at your "Essential Me" blog, and I love the poems you poated by Anna A.--
Also I was re-reading your post on CKW (conversations?) It is so fascinating...shedding light on your mysteries.
I have not been writing lately--my life has become complicated--but right now I am determined to get back to normal. Maybe tomorrow?
Thanks for being a wonderful friend!

Monday, April 6, 2009 at 10:26:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Complications in life -- we all seem to have it in intervals...infact its become so common for me..and now, when things are too normal, i get to feel a bit uneasy :))

anyway, nice to know you found those posts interesting....and when some one say I am mysterious I feel confounded...to me I seem so simple...a forever love kind as you say here! :)

i'll be here tomorrow, my dear..

love,
devika

Monday, April 6, 2009 at 10:41:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

just came checking, my dear

hope things are fine with you...will come later

wishes,
devika

Tuesday, April 7, 2009 at 11:23:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--If you were simple, (as you are not!) you would not have so many deep and interesting things to say...
I know just what you mean about "feeling uneasy when things get too normal" I always take that as a sign that an earthquake of some sort is about to happen in my life--as well it should.

Just posted something new--thanks for keeping after me to write!

Wednesday, April 8, 2009 at 12:16:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Okay, i fully leave it to you my dear...

But I thought my thoughts were the simple ones that affect a very normal human mind...but yes, I am bit too sensitive..though I may show otherwise :)

I read in Woolf's diary..that she often desired for something very intense that would keep her insane mind well absorbed...

earthquake...tearing off homes...oh no! a storm is okay :))

wishes,
devika

Wednesday, April 8, 2009 at 12:44:00 AM EDT  

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