Friday, April 03, 2009

behind your mind

just lean a bit this way
until you fall

into a hidden room
behind your mind

where only you can enter

just you
and the universe
that's all

and did I mention
there is no floor

only a steady flow
of love
to hold you

no walls to keep
your thoughts
from melting

no better time than now
to lean
this way

11 Comments:

Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

"only a steady flow
of love
to hold you"

that's enough for me...and if that flows like a river from all in this world...letting people be themselves...not torturing oneself or others for past deeds...when does our educated minds fully open up to the beauty of selfless love?

anyway, thoughts flow when I read poems....and the kind of wash me, clarify me...

and thank you so mcuh for that, my dear...your poems are always a look out :)

and this one..is exactly the way I was thinking...the assurance of a loving hand...i feel here :)

wishes,
devika

Wednesday, April 8, 2009 at 12:35:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--thank you so much--I'm glad you understand...

Wednesday, April 8, 2009 at 12:38:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

always my dear :)

wishes,
devika

Wednesday, April 8, 2009 at 12:45:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Lorraine said...

Thank you I feel better now...:)

Wednesday, April 8, 2009 at 12:58:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--thanks, as always...

Lorraine--oh, I'm so glad--may it last!

Wednesday, April 8, 2009 at 9:30:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Janice Thomson said...

Beautiful Firebird.
If only each one of us did this what a delightful world we would live in...ah, someday it will be like this...

Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 12:06:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Kai said...

nicceeee. how r u?

Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 4:44:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Janice--what a wonderful thought, hope we can make it happen!

Kai--thanks, I'm hanging in there...

Friday, April 10, 2009 at 9:29:00 AM EDT  
Blogger goatman said...

Just myself and the universe?
I think that I have been to this place -- and here it is again!
Nice poem

Friday, April 10, 2009 at 2:48:00 PM EDT  
Blogger krystyna said...

You're right -

no better time than now
to lean
this way


just me and the universe

Thank you so much, dear Firebird for showing me this way - behind my mind.

Have a wonderful day!

Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 6:14:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Goatman--I'm glad you found it too--thanks for believing, good to see you here again!

Krystyna--love your comment--have a wonderful day too!

Tuesday, April 14, 2009 at 9:17:00 PM EDT  

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