Friday, February 13, 2009

valentine

I found
for you
a perfect circle
of sea

where the sun
had splashed in and out
all afternoon

like a child
diving down
to wiggle its bare toes
on the
sandy bottom

the February ice
had dissolved
into bubbles

the wind had also melted away

and I tried
to save
a piece
of the turquoise day

for you
marbled with gold
like a cat's eye

dripping wet
in both hands

This valentine is for my beloved readers, all of you, known and unknown--!

23 Comments:

Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Perfect, my dear bird

i doubt if you you peeped into my mind, last night :)

love,
devika

Friday, February 13, 2009 at 11:48:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--No I didn't, but now I am dying to know what I missed!
Please let me in on it...

Friday, February 13, 2009 at 11:53:00 PM EST  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

hahaha..

why the hurry, my dear bird..
i am there with you and we will get to know the other as we go...

as of now I tell you -- you got it all perfectly well :)


devika

Saturday, February 14, 2009 at 12:02:00 AM EST  
Blogger Lorraine said...

and I love every single letter in this thoroughly loving poetry

Saturday, February 14, 2009 at 11:30:00 AM EST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Life is a circle. We are all one. To attune to energy enables people to reconnect to what matters. That is unwavering, unconditional love. Choose to believe love is the answer.

Sunday, February 15, 2009 at 10:27:00 PM EST  
Blogger MB said...

Oh, I am so ready for sun. Thank you.

Sunday, February 15, 2009 at 11:51:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--I'm glad to hear it!

Lorraine--And I am sending my love here in every letter, for you!

Liara--So true! And I promise to live by it, too!

MB--Hi, Western bluebird--I was thinking of you today, wondering how you are doing--missed you. Glad to see you back!

Monday, February 16, 2009 at 10:25:00 PM EST  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

My dear bird, i was about to reach you and your response came in :)

just to say, i have new poetry blog..now experimenting with haiku :)

visit won't you?

http://devika-poetry.blogspot.com/

love, always
devika

Monday, February 16, 2009 at 10:29:00 PM EST  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

My dear bird,

I had to close comments at my blogs...just another of my 'reactions' -- but I have been thinking about it for a while now...

Just wanted to inform, after inviting you -- it would otherwise look odd :)

wishes,
devika

Tuesday, February 17, 2009 at 12:38:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--Yes, your new poetry blog is very beautiful! I enjoyed reading and also the photos...but it is sad not to see the comments. Your readers enjoy commenting, and are very supportive and enthusiastic! But I understand you needed a break...

Tuesday, February 17, 2009 at 7:36:00 PM EST  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Thanks, my dear bird...

I know -- I am wrong in closing comments. especially when I move around commenting at other blogs...

But, unfortunately I have to take a full break from it, if I am to blog...while its a pleasure to read comments from those who love poetry, or are poets themselves....I am tired of the junks who come to read me through my poetry...

My life is very different from what I write..and I can't have any of those to spoil my day...and am one who has lots of committment that I myself have chosen to fulfil...

For a good time in the past I have been trying to make all ends meet and now losing mental and physical health..

So comment is one I shall not choose to open any time, if I blog :)

thank you for all the support you give,

love,
devika

Tuesday, February 17, 2009 at 8:46:00 PM EST  
Blogger Keshi said...

It takes a BIG heart to give out LOVE to total strangers. And I think u hv that kinda heart.

beautiful!

Keshi.

Wednesday, February 18, 2009 at 7:18:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Keshi--Thank you for your very generous comment! I really appreciate it...and I am so happy you came here and are not "anonymous! I really enjoy your blog, too!
And of course, it's so easy to give love when people give it back...

Wednesday, February 18, 2009 at 10:11:00 PM EST  
Blogger Mark said...

Wonderful! Spring is on it's way!

Thursday, February 19, 2009 at 11:05:00 AM EST  
Blogger Keshi said...

o no Im never anonymous...altho some ppl leave anon comments in my blog just to get to me. But they fail miserably :)

Its wonderful being at ur wonderful blog!

Keshi.

Thursday, February 19, 2009 at 6:30:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Mark--Yes, yes, YES...! And soon.

Keshi--I think I would recognize you even if you WERE anonymous...your light is too bright to hide!

Thursday, February 19, 2009 at 8:20:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--I just wanted to say, your new blog with the poems and photos is very peaceful--a healing experience. I can understand now what you were envisioning...

Thursday, February 19, 2009 at 8:42:00 PM EST  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Thanks my dear, I perhaps know you would. :)

Again, my i'm sad that the world would never mature to understand that...some older ones seem worse than the 18-20 year olds!

anyway, not my concern...
the world is not on top of me, nor I am on top of it...

But I may still react, in my ways :)

thanks for letting me know, my dear

love,
devika

Thursday, February 19, 2009 at 8:47:00 PM EST  
Blogger krystyna said...

I feel that I am the one of your beloved readers too, (hug)..
so thank you for sun.
Beautiful gift!

Friday, February 20, 2009 at 6:20:00 AM EST  
Blogger YesNoMaybeSo said...

gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous! your style is elegant!!

Friday, February 20, 2009 at 10:44:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Krystyna--You are definitely one of my most beloved readers, and it is always a joy to get your comments! Many hugs back to you!

Jenn--Wow, what a great comment!
You get big hugs from me, too!

Friday, February 20, 2009 at 11:21:00 PM EST  
Blogger Kai said...

wonderful....
miss beautiful firebird<3

Sunday, February 22, 2009 at 10:51:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Kai--Is that a Valentine heart from you? Thank you, thank you, my dear poetess!

Sunday, February 22, 2009 at 8:44:00 PM EST  

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