Sunday, February 01, 2009

dear heart

dear heart,
were you waiting

for a perfect angle
of sunrise
to melt the snow

was there a bluebird
expected

perhaps a lava flow

or, to be more gentle
a thinning
of the earth's skin
just so

were you hoping for warmth
are you willing
to settle

let's talk

10 Comments:

Blogger krystyna said...

Let's talk with our heart
every day
every time

only heart is good listener
only heart knows answer

Beautiful Firebird,
beautiful for my morning contemplation.
Thank you!

Have a wonderful day!

Love & hugsss

Monday, February 2, 2009 at 7:08:00 AM EST  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

let me know how the talk went, my dear bird :))

Good one, dear
when you ask this way, one is bound to respond :)

love,
devika

Monday, February 2, 2009 at 10:46:00 AM EST  
Blogger Lorraine said...

I am touched once again by what you evoke with you heartfelt words, the world could do with your gentleness :)

Monday, February 2, 2009 at 12:03:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Krystyna, I am so happy I can be part of your morning contemplation-- Your comment is so poetic! Love and hugs back...

Devika--Thanks, I think the talks will go on forever--but this one is finding some answers...new questions never end, of course!

Lorraine--I love the feelings in your comment, and I am so happy that I touched yours...thanks again...

Monday, February 2, 2009 at 8:30:00 PM EST  
Blogger Janice Thomson said...

How beautifully expressed Firebird.
If one waits for just the right time it may never come. Love the way you gently bring things into focus.

Tuesday, February 3, 2009 at 12:19:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Janice--Thank you for such a beautiful comment, and for your insight!

Tuesday, February 3, 2009 at 8:34:00 PM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Yes ma'am!! I love to settle in a field of such beautiful words. That is my Murphy. He goes to work with me; I go to walk with him.

Wednesday, February 4, 2009 at 11:01:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Pat--Sure, come settle here with Murphy--there's plenty of room! You two sound like a great team--does he get to go out on boats, too?
Dogs are the greatest exercise machine/personal trainers, aren't they?

Wednesday, February 4, 2009 at 12:11:00 PM EST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Dear firebird,

foreclosing your kind permission I translated this your poem I do really love and put it on my blog. Excuse my late asking and feel free to put the blame on me. Nevertheless I feel confident you won't!

Best wishes
Susanne

P.S. Sorry, there had been a little error in my comment, so I had to delete the first comment and post a new one.

Here's the link and here it is:

Mein Herz,
hast du gewartet

auf den perfekten Winkel
des Sonnenlichts
den Schnee zu schmelzen

hast du ein Rotkehlchen
erwartet

oder einen Lavastrom

oder, großzügiger noch,
ein sich Dünnen
der Erde Haut
nur so

hofftest du auf Wärme
bist du gewillt
zur Tat

laß uns reden

Sunday, February 8, 2009 at 6:29:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Susanne--As you know, I am always delighted when you like one of my poems enough to translate it for your blog! I love so much seeing it in German, your translation seems so poetic, I only wish I knew more German...but I am studying whenever I can!
Thank you so much, Susanne--and of course you do not have to ask!

Sunday, February 8, 2009 at 10:05:00 PM EST  

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