dear heart
dear heart,
were you waiting
for a perfect angle
of sunrise
to melt the snow
was there a bluebird
expected
perhaps a lava flow
or, to be more gentle
a thinning
of the earth's skin
just so
were you hoping for warmth
are you willing
to settle
let's talk
were you waiting
for a perfect angle
of sunrise
to melt the snow
was there a bluebird
expected
perhaps a lava flow
or, to be more gentle
a thinning
of the earth's skin
just so
were you hoping for warmth
are you willing
to settle
let's talk
10 Comments:
Let's talk with our heart
every day
every time
only heart is good listener
only heart knows answer
Beautiful Firebird,
beautiful for my morning contemplation.
Thank you!
Have a wonderful day!
Love & hugsss
let me know how the talk went, my dear bird :))
Good one, dear
when you ask this way, one is bound to respond :)
love,
devika
I am touched once again by what you evoke with you heartfelt words, the world could do with your gentleness :)
Krystyna, I am so happy I can be part of your morning contemplation-- Your comment is so poetic! Love and hugs back...
Devika--Thanks, I think the talks will go on forever--but this one is finding some answers...new questions never end, of course!
Lorraine--I love the feelings in your comment, and I am so happy that I touched yours...thanks again...
How beautifully expressed Firebird.
If one waits for just the right time it may never come. Love the way you gently bring things into focus.
Janice--Thank you for such a beautiful comment, and for your insight!
Yes ma'am!! I love to settle in a field of such beautiful words. That is my Murphy. He goes to work with me; I go to walk with him.
Pat--Sure, come settle here with Murphy--there's plenty of room! You two sound like a great team--does he get to go out on boats, too?
Dogs are the greatest exercise machine/personal trainers, aren't they?
Dear firebird,
foreclosing your kind permission I translated this your poem I do really love and put it on my blog. Excuse my late asking and feel free to put the blame on me. Nevertheless I feel confident you won't!
Best wishes
Susanne
P.S. Sorry, there had been a little error in my comment, so I had to delete the first comment and post a new one.
Here's the link and here it is:
Mein Herz,
hast du gewartet
auf den perfekten Winkel
des Sonnenlichts
den Schnee zu schmelzen
hast du ein Rotkehlchen
erwartet
oder einen Lavastrom
oder, großzügiger noch,
ein sich Dünnen
der Erde Haut
nur so
hofftest du auf Wärme
bist du gewillt
zur Tat
laß uns reden
Susanne--As you know, I am always delighted when you like one of my poems enough to translate it for your blog! I love so much seeing it in German, your translation seems so poetic, I only wish I knew more German...but I am studying whenever I can!
Thank you so much, Susanne--and of course you do not have to ask!
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