conversation with a grapefruit
I was not ready
for that moment
when suddenly
your bitterness
gave way
to honey
lady, you knew
when you
peeled back my skin
that I was a mystery
your acid
made my heart shrink
but you were seeking
sweetness
do not lie
it is the fear of sharpness
that caused my eyes
to close
so
in that instant
when your hidden colors
blossomed on my tongue
I wept
why is that?
for the cells
in my being
that slept
for that moment
when suddenly
your bitterness
gave way
to honey
lady, you knew
when you
peeled back my skin
that I was a mystery
your acid
made my heart shrink
but you were seeking
sweetness
do not lie
it is the fear of sharpness
that caused my eyes
to close
so
in that instant
when your hidden colors
blossomed on my tongue
I wept
why is that?
for the cells
in my being
that slept
17 Comments:
stunned by the true beauty of your words... i feel as though all that is good in the world has crystalized right here in this moment... in these words... wow! what a gift you are to all of us. i can't stop reading and rereading this poem. so inspired. love your words, love your spirit, big hugs, snowsparkle
ss--wow, you must have found this the minute I posted it! (and I was thinking today how I missed you--you must have gotten my thought message...)
your comments are the greatest--filling me with love and light! Thanks--
"lady, you knew
when you
peeled back my skin...
that I was a mystery"
Yeah lady, I knew you were a mystery :))
"but you were seeking
sweetness...
do not lie"
No, no lying -- I was :))
"I wept
why is that?"
Wonder if excessive tartaric acid makes one weep :))
Set aside my blah, blah..love this poem my dear bird...
You put it all in such poetic ways..small little lines..I love it, as I love you :)
love,
devika
Devika--you make me smile! Do I think perhaps you are a chemical engineer...? Anyway, I think tartaric acid would make ME cry--not that I have tried it--
thank you for your sweet and sassy comment!
:-)
thanks dear, I am civil engineer...an engineer who is just civil :))
love,
devika
I am bewildered and bewitched, you are a Charm...you are magical, I am speechless
and I agree with Snowsparkle a 100%...what a gift you are
Devika--I can see you are developing the "civil" side of your multifaceted personality...! And I like all of it--be yourself--we will follow...
Lorraine--your comment is breathtaking, and I will treasure it in my heart--I needed that!
I cannot be, but myself, my dear..I am trying to be more accomodative of those who pinch me and others...But sometimes I just lose control :)
btw, "we will follow" -- is there anything "civil" about it??
We should all walk together, i believe..
love,
devika
After reading such beautiful comments here,
I know my words will be too humble.
Fabulous!
Can I put this poem on my blog one day?
(with your link)
Well as I have a mind that can twist pretty much anything, I see several turns in this. All of which I like!!
Devika--you are right, walking together is the best--but if you lead in a loving direction, following is natural!
Krystyna--your offer is the highest praise--of course you can put this on your blog, I would be honored!
Pat--you are very perceptive, I would say...poems have a way of leading in unexpected directions!
If its all about love, there's no question of leading and following, my dearest :)
wishes,
devika
Thank you dearest. I Hope it will :)
wishes,
devika
Devika--perhaps "showing" or "inspiring" would be more acceptable than "leading"? That is what I meant. Of course you are right in what you say.
Kai--thanks, I appreciate your comment--you are a beautiful person!
Wow...
What a beautiful, beautiful poem Firebird. Like Snowsparkle I read this over and over savouring each line. What a talented poetess you are - what a beautiful soul you have.
Janice--your beautiful words mean a lot to me...all I can say is thank you for touching my heart...
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