this body
temple
etched by the sun
who built you
whose love
shaped your arches and rafters
whose cry
called you into being
and what sound
needed a home
so badly
temple
carved by the wind, fissured
but standing
this body, still bearing
its creators name
etched by the sun
who built you
whose love
shaped your arches and rafters
whose cry
called you into being
and what sound
needed a home
so badly
temple
carved by the wind, fissured
but standing
this body, still bearing
its creators name
posted by Yes at 11:31 PM
16 Comments:
I was so awed by this, you've layed down a true foundation, how marvelous, are you!!!
"fissured but standing"
how long will it stand, my dear :)
good poem, my bird
love,
devika
What a wonderful and meaningful metaphor! The ending is exquisite. I love this. One of your best Firebird.
Lorraine--Thank you, I like your metaphor, how clever!
Devika--we will not count the years...not necessary, just live and enjoy! (as best we can)
Janice--your comment is awesome--and means a lot to me--thanks!
True and sure, my bird...
I feel I am gaining some strength day by day..yet, feel very desperate at times..God would be with me, i feel...sometimes as you :)
love,
devika
Devika--your strength is greater than you think--and God is there always...loving you.
I Love you so much too, my dear...
devika
I love this poem, dear Firebird!
Every words are accurate
as a meditate
deep meditate
and Be new
whole new
and you.
Thank you so much!
hugssss
Krystyna--you wrote me a poem here!
It is beautiful...and I thank you for what you say about meditating--I feel that you really understand what I am writing!
oh, this is great!
Tu cuerpo
templo de amor
en el habita
aquel que es real
...
Bendecida seas
Isaac
Polona--Thank you so much--so glad to see you again!
Isaac--Gracias--yo se que tu me entiendes! Que seas feliz...
just came to say hi, my dear..
I am a bit too happy today :)
look forward to some good photos and poems :)
wishes,
devika
Such a beautiful temple you are!!
Simply beautiful. It reminds me of a phrase I often say to myself to bring inner calm, "God is breathing me."
Blessings all around...
Devika--glad you are happy! May the moment last...
Pat--Well! Aren't we all beautiful temples...(especially you--and your cute doggie!)
Jan--I love your mantra! It is so inspiring--thanks for sharing it with us.
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