words
I want to send you
a world of music
but all I have are words
words like scouts
in single file
soft as leaves
brushing your window
if you close your eyes
they are
in harmony
maybe
a world of music
but all I have are words
words like scouts
in single file
soft as leaves
brushing your window
if you close your eyes
they are
in harmony
maybe
posted by Yes at 8:02 PM
10 Comments:
Firebird I absolutely love this!
A delightful twist at the end - your words are definitely in harmony for me :)
touch touch
march march
Janice--I love your comment! Thank you ...and you know so much yourself about harmony...
Echo--your words are definitely reaching my heart! Your comment is a harmonious poem in itself!
Yours words are music to me, more than a vibration...I love this Fireb
I do not know if words are in harmony with me..or I am in harmony with words...
Howsoever, I just know I need words around me :)
lovely one, my dear bird
love,
devika
Lorraine--Thank you so much for saying that...it means a lot to me--
Devika--Harmony is a whole, no direction needed--and I would say words are your aura...
damn, i love your poetry.
Bird--Wow, I really appreciate that--
and your prose is awesome, especially your last post...
Without contrast harmony has no meaning. I do love your poetry,"soft as leaves brushing my window"
Pat--I'm going to think about that one--I suppose harmony has its built-in contrasts...and of course, the contrast of this imperfect poem! Thanks for the lovely comment!
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