Sunday, January 18, 2009

words

I want to send you
a world of music

but all I have are words

words like scouts
in single file

soft as leaves
brushing your window

if you close your eyes
they are
in harmony

maybe

10 Comments:

Blogger Janice Thomson said...

Firebird I absolutely love this!
A delightful twist at the end - your words are definitely in harmony for me :)

Sunday, January 18, 2009 at 9:23:00 PM EST  
Blogger Echo said...

touch touch

march march

Monday, January 19, 2009 at 12:46:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Janice--I love your comment! Thank you ...and you know so much yourself about harmony...

Echo--your words are definitely reaching my heart! Your comment is a harmonious poem in itself!

Monday, January 19, 2009 at 8:06:00 AM EST  
Blogger Lorraine said...

Yours words are music to me, more than a vibration...I love this Fireb

Monday, January 19, 2009 at 8:47:00 AM EST  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

I do not know if words are in harmony with me..or I am in harmony with words...

Howsoever, I just know I need words around me :)

lovely one, my dear bird

love,
devika

Monday, January 19, 2009 at 11:46:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Lorraine--Thank you so much for saying that...it means a lot to me--

Devika--Harmony is a whole, no direction needed--and I would say words are your aura...

Monday, January 19, 2009 at 9:11:00 PM EST  
Blogger Bird said...

damn, i love your poetry.

Wednesday, January 21, 2009 at 1:49:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Bird--Wow, I really appreciate that--
and your prose is awesome, especially your last post...

Wednesday, January 21, 2009 at 12:46:00 PM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Without contrast harmony has no meaning. I do love your poetry,"soft as leaves brushing my window"

Friday, January 30, 2009 at 11:09:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Pat--I'm going to think about that one--I suppose harmony has its built-in contrasts...and of course, the contrast of this imperfect poem! Thanks for the lovely comment!

Saturday, January 31, 2009 at 12:03:00 AM EST  

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