Goldfinch
more than a jewel,
yellow streak
on tawny wings
world of gold
what are you taking hold of
inside me
you have captured us
I and
the yellow starflower
pulled into the power of your dance
while you sit motionless
radiant
on the tip of a branch
the zebra swallowtail
lifts its translucent wings
towards you
as if to the noon sun
and my soul, no longer soiled
spills out its true color
yellow, not adorned
but born, like you
pure native light
and flying,
even at rest
yellow streak
on tawny wings
world of gold
what are you taking hold of
inside me
you have captured us
I and
the yellow starflower
pulled into the power of your dance
while you sit motionless
radiant
on the tip of a branch
the zebra swallowtail
lifts its translucent wings
towards you
as if to the noon sun
and my soul, no longer soiled
spills out its true color
yellow, not adorned
but born, like you
pure native light
and flying,
even at rest
6 Comments:
Hello Firebird! You have captured the beauty of the goldfinch and its meaning to you so well. The line 'yellow not adorned but born' stands out to me the most. Many cheers to you :)
a different shade... wow... it speaks a lot... (jz have to have a glance :) )
I wish I could sweety, show my true colours they are a wonder to me, wow I love every words that your spirit sprouts, literally x
Lovely poetry, dear bird...like a balmy breeze the images flow :)
wishes,
devika
SB--so happy to see you here--and your comment makes me joyful, too! I love that you singled out that line--thanks for your visit and comment!
Bhargav--I do appreciate your comment, and always glad when you visit!
Lorraine--I believe you do show your true colors every time you take a photo and write a poem--and they are beautiful! Thank you so much, your comment means a lot to me.
Devika--your graceful flowing comment is relaxing and free--like a vacation! (Don't we need that!)
so nice a return comment to have, dear bird :)
wishes,
devika
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