Saturday, May 28, 2011

The Wind

“you are perfection,”
says the wind

pulling my leaves into
a ragged knot

sometimes gently,
sometimes with a gust
that shakes my roots
from the ground

and where is my force
to push against you
should I want to

you made me tall and
whip-like
to bend, flatten, arch, and spring back
throwing my very top
from sky to sky

and what is my form
but you
rearranging my twigs
to more quietly
pass through

still a whisper
under the steely roar

“you are perfection,”
says the wind

8 Comments:

Blogger Lorraine said...

the wind is my friend, and this tore me up in all the ways of the wind...magnificent dear Bird

Sunday, May 29, 2011 at 7:55:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

"and what is my form
but you" My favourite lines


much love...

Monday, May 30, 2011 at 4:02:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

a tree in the wind...i can see your strength here, dear bird, beautifully evocative poem as always :)

i am late; missed this when it was posted, but it showed today :)

wishes,
devika

Tuesday, May 31, 2011 at 12:07:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

on linking the photo to the poem, it is all the more beautiful :)

wishes,
devika

Tuesday, May 31, 2011 at 12:14:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Lorraine--thank you for feeling it--that means a lot to me...

Gillena--I'm so happy you singled out that line--you are very sensitive, and I thank you so much for your comment!

Devika--Your comments are always worth waiting for! And I did feel that the photo was somehow part of the feeling...

Tuesday, May 31, 2011 at 10:59:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Always, my pleasureto read your poems, dear bird :)

wishes,
devika

Tuesday, May 31, 2011 at 11:27:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Bhargav Bhatt said...

optimism of a human soul...
very creative writing...

the breeze creates an aura and we just try to live the moment..

do visit if time permits
www.soul-n-heart.blogspot.com

Sunday, June 19, 2011 at 3:37:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--Thanks and loving wishes to you!

Bhargav--I am very happy you found your way here, and I do enjoy your poems!

Thursday, June 23, 2011 at 10:26:00 PM EDT  

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