The Wind
“you are perfection,”
says the wind
pulling my leaves into
a ragged knot
sometimes gently,
sometimes with a gust
that shakes my roots
from the ground
and where is my force
to push against you
should I want to
you made me tall and
whip-like
to bend, flatten, arch, and spring back
throwing my very top
from sky to sky
and what is my form
but you
rearranging my twigs
to more quietly
pass through
still a whisper
under the steely roar
“you are perfection,”
says the wind
says the wind
pulling my leaves into
a ragged knot
sometimes gently,
sometimes with a gust
that shakes my roots
from the ground
and where is my force
to push against you
should I want to
you made me tall and
whip-like
to bend, flatten, arch, and spring back
throwing my very top
from sky to sky
and what is my form
but you
rearranging my twigs
to more quietly
pass through
still a whisper
under the steely roar
“you are perfection,”
says the wind
8 Comments:
the wind is my friend, and this tore me up in all the ways of the wind...magnificent dear Bird
"and what is my form
but you" My favourite lines
much love...
a tree in the wind...i can see your strength here, dear bird, beautifully evocative poem as always :)
i am late; missed this when it was posted, but it showed today :)
wishes,
devika
on linking the photo to the poem, it is all the more beautiful :)
wishes,
devika
Lorraine--thank you for feeling it--that means a lot to me...
Gillena--I'm so happy you singled out that line--you are very sensitive, and I thank you so much for your comment!
Devika--Your comments are always worth waiting for! And I did feel that the photo was somehow part of the feeling...
Always, my pleasureto read your poems, dear bird :)
wishes,
devika
optimism of a human soul...
very creative writing...
the breeze creates an aura and we just try to live the moment..
do visit if time permits
www.soul-n-heart.blogspot.com
Devika--Thanks and loving wishes to you!
Bhargav--I am very happy you found your way here, and I do enjoy your poems!
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