Friday, July 18, 2008

heartbeat

here, it is here
that water gives way

here, it is here
that it pounds
against stones

here, it whispers
like wind on wood

here, it trembles
like sand under rain

here, it crackles
like angels
agitated

there, it gallops
with the soul
through the night

6 Comments:

Blogger Kuan Gung said...

there, it gallops
with the soul
through the night

Very nice!

Saturday, July 19, 2008 at 3:49:00 AM EDT  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

"Trembles like sand under rain" is good too.

Sunday, July 20, 2008 at 1:27:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

kuan gung--I am honored that you stopped by, and I appreciate your comment--it means a lot to me that you make your presence known.

So curious how you found this blog...and I appreciate the ideas expressed on yours!

paul--so good to see you here, too!
(glad you like that line)

Tuesday, July 22, 2008 at 12:23:00 AM EDT  
Blogger krystyna said...

Beautiful words...I can say..
What a beautiful song!
Love it!

Thursday, July 31, 2008 at 10:15:00 PM EDT  
Blogger MB said...

The whole poem gallops. Lovely photo.

Friday, August 1, 2008 at 10:59:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

krystyna--"a song"? I never thought about it that way--thanks for giving it a new dimension! So good to see you here--

mb--you have a way with succinct comments! Thank you so much...

Friday, August 1, 2008 at 11:20:00 PM EDT  

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