heartbeat
here, it is here
that water gives way
here, it is here
that it pounds
against stones
here, it whispers
like wind on wood
here, it trembles
like sand under rain
here, it crackles
like angels
agitated
there, it gallops
with the soul
through the night
that water gives way
here, it is here
that it pounds
against stones
here, it whispers
like wind on wood
here, it trembles
like sand under rain
here, it crackles
like angels
agitated
there, it gallops
with the soul
through the night
6 Comments:
there, it gallops
with the soul
through the night
Very nice!
"Trembles like sand under rain" is good too.
kuan gung--I am honored that you stopped by, and I appreciate your comment--it means a lot to me that you make your presence known.
So curious how you found this blog...and I appreciate the ideas expressed on yours!
paul--so good to see you here, too!
(glad you like that line)
Beautiful words...I can say..
What a beautiful song!
Love it!
The whole poem gallops. Lovely photo.
krystyna--"a song"? I never thought about it that way--thanks for giving it a new dimension! So good to see you here--
mb--you have a way with succinct comments! Thank you so much...
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