Monday, January 28, 2008

rest

enough reaching for the sun

let's ease our wings
onto the thermals
and rest

it's what we do best
cutting tracks
into the warm wind
with a weightless breast

caressed
and carried
by that sheer river
of broken light

that holds the sun out of reach

and lowers us
like hatchlings
into the feathered nest
of night

7 Comments:

Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Vivian, the most beautiful description of "letting go" what ever we're chasing and rest. I love it!!

sniffling, sneezing and all!
I still need to reach for the dayquil, though.

Tuesday, January 29, 2008 at 8:33:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Many thanks, Pat--

I did write this poem with you in mind, since you made me sit down and get to work--
I did not know yet that you were sick--
but I guess the theme of the poem was appropriate!

And I hope it helps you to feel better about resting--since I know it is so exasperating to have your life on hold while you recover!

Get well soon...

Wednesday, January 30, 2008 at 10:23:00 AM EST  
Blogger Clare said...

Hi Firebird -- I love the incredible imagery in this and the softness and grace in it. And "sheer river of broken light" is really lovely.

Monday, February 4, 2008 at 1:32:00 AM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Would you believe I still have this crap, the cough part anyway. Seems like colds last longer than they used to. Thank you!!

Monday, February 4, 2008 at 7:43:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Clare--It's always a treat to have you come by--and I love your generous and lyrical comments!
Thank you so much!

Pat--sorry you are still not feeling well--now I have a cold too!
I'm getting by on pseudoephedrine and warm water rinses up my nose...
I always have a lingering cough after a cold, which is probably allergic.
But--I do feel Spring in the air!

Tuesday, February 5, 2008 at 10:21:00 AM EST  
Blogger MB said...

Some lovely images suggesting a kind of graceful submitting, the way I read it.

Monday, February 11, 2008 at 10:27:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Thank yo, mb--I'm so happy to see you here again! Such a touching comment...hope you are relaxing once in a while, yourself!

Thursday, February 14, 2008 at 1:14:00 AM EST  

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