Friday, August 24, 2007

to my chicory

forget-me-nots
are tender blue
as kisses
drilled into the sky

forget-me-nots
sing you in close
like the wildness
in a baby's eyes

but my chicory
explodes when my back is turned
strides forth
knee high

your bald blue, my dear
not found elsewhere
in the firmament
(I know, I have looked)

back on all these years
embarrassed by
your stems and stubs
like sore elbows

and your lady, Queen Anne
raising her rough cages into the air
like fists
dodging the weed-whacker

but in this new season
the slanting sun sinks
like melted butter into the road
and your face

perfect rows of rays
spreading from inside the heart
your dry mineral intricacy
paper-sheer

invariable blue
your face, my chicory
is a window

as Queen Anne
exhales overnight
tweaking her shoulders
snorting like a cow, opening her arms

into a forest of lace
stiff legs holding up
that dizzying sweep, your spread of
sun's laughter

for if the sun could laugh
it would follow me
down this road

where you wave, and wave
blue chicory, white froth
pedestrian
but blue beyond breath

13 Comments:

Blogger Clare said...

Hi Firebird!! Chicory and Queen Anne make such a lovely couple! Really beautiful poem, Firebird. I loved "embarrassed by/ your stems and stubs/ like sore elbows" and "tweaking her shoulders/ snorting like a cow..." -- you brought out the personalities in Chicory and Queen Anne in such a lovely way. Have a great weekend!
:)

Saturday, August 25, 2007 at 1:22:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Clare, you made my day! I was worried that people wouldn't know these flowers --
I'm delighted that you understand so well...
Thanks so much for your wonderful comment!

Saturday, August 25, 2007 at 10:01:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Mandy said...

Oh my yes very good.

A well rattled poem that rolls on but stays on track

the wildness in a baby's eyes
fists dodging the weed-whacker
spread of sun's laughter

are brill phrases.

Saturday, August 25, 2007 at 12:39:00 PM EDT  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

sorry, but I thought your poem to be such sad. Did I miss the true meaning?

I like, hm, I am used to take american english to be kind of childish - quick, lovely, but never severe or ernest. My fault, I think. Europeans tend to be a bit snotty about the colonies, you know.

Nevertheless - your words did make me sad, very sad.

Saturday, August 25, 2007 at 2:59:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Mandy--I like your "well-rattled poem" image...it fits so well--
and thanks for commenting on the lines, it means a lot to me!

Susanne--I'm not sure why the poem made you feel sad--it is about things that made me feel sad before, but now I appreciate that they are beautiful--just like life...
The words in this poem are not easy, I admire you for trying to capture the meaning...
Interesting what you say about American English--I try to be earnest in a childlike way, maybe--but it is a disguise...

Monday, August 27, 2007 at 12:02:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

You're back!! I can see Queen Anne raising her fists at the weed whacker. I normal stick my foot in its destructive twine. Beautiful, beautiful as always!! From your comment on my blog, you're a nurse by day??

Monday, August 27, 2007 at 9:38:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Thanks, Pat--I am sorry to be gone so long, actually my job has been crazy lately (Physician Assistant--you were close!) since the doctor I work with is on vacation--
I only get to write in the wee hours when I can't sleep...

Also, I just found out my weekend house in the mountains is one rotten beam away from collapsing--SO, I have a new project: tearing it down and rebuilding my dream house from scratch in a hurry! (it's coming along GREAT, I have a terrific local team, designed it in a week, now we're waiting for town approval. Should be up before it gets too cold, if all goes well!
(I'm actually having fun with this--perhaps I can rewrite Murphy's Law?

Monday, August 27, 2007 at 11:38:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Paul said...

Imagery that works, as usual. I still say your consistency is amazing. The themes/execution are consistent. But within that, it's variable - not repetitive.

Friday, August 31, 2007 at 10:53:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Thanks, Paul--for being so supportive! I really need to hear if I'm being repetitive--
sometimes I wonder, as there are only so many words and images to use
(or maybe it only seems that way, compared to the infinite variety of God's universe!)

Saturday, September 1, 2007 at 7:09:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Paul said...

I guess if really thought you were being repetitive I'd answer that with an email! No, I don't.

It's that you write with a certain style and consistently address certain themes - basically love and nature, usually with the two interwoven - that makes what you write very identifiable.

Wednesday, September 19, 2007 at 10:18:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Paul--
I'll take that gratefully as a compliment, and also as a promise that you will give me any criticism without holding back!

I do appreciate your being so kind...

Wednesday, September 19, 2007 at 11:15:00 PM EDT  
Blogger MB said...

Been missing you.

Friday, September 21, 2007 at 4:22:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Hi mb--I miss you too! It's been so hectic, I can't even put pen to paper without falling asleep...

The new house plans have been approved, so now it's a mad rush to pack up and clear out the old house for demolition--move all the garden plants, hopefully to have the new house up before the snows!

I promise to return soon, poems are moving through my brain like clouds on a windy day...

Sunday, September 23, 2007 at 11:51:00 AM EDT  

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