to my chicory
forget-me-nots
are tender blue
as kisses
drilled into the sky
forget-me-nots
sing you in close
like the wildness
in a baby's eyes
but my chicory
explodes when my back is turned
strides forth
knee high
your bald blue, my dear
not found elsewhere
in the firmament
(I know, I have looked)
back on all these years
embarrassed by
your stems and stubs
like sore elbows
and your lady, Queen Anne
raising her rough cages into the air
like fists
dodging the weed-whacker
but in this new season
the slanting sun sinks
like melted butter into the road
and your face
perfect rows of rays
spreading from inside the heart
your dry mineral intricacy
paper-sheer
invariable blue
your face, my chicory
is a window
as Queen Anne
exhales overnight
tweaking her shoulders
snorting like a cow, opening her arms
into a forest of lace
stiff legs holding up
that dizzying sweep, your spread of
sun's laughter
for if the sun could laugh
it would follow me
down this road
where you wave, and wave
blue chicory, white froth
pedestrian
but blue beyond breath
are tender blue
as kisses
drilled into the sky
forget-me-nots
sing you in close
like the wildness
in a baby's eyes
but my chicory
explodes when my back is turned
strides forth
knee high
your bald blue, my dear
not found elsewhere
in the firmament
(I know, I have looked)
back on all these years
embarrassed by
your stems and stubs
like sore elbows
and your lady, Queen Anne
raising her rough cages into the air
like fists
dodging the weed-whacker
but in this new season
the slanting sun sinks
like melted butter into the road
and your face
perfect rows of rays
spreading from inside the heart
your dry mineral intricacy
paper-sheer
invariable blue
your face, my chicory
is a window
as Queen Anne
exhales overnight
tweaking her shoulders
snorting like a cow, opening her arms
into a forest of lace
stiff legs holding up
that dizzying sweep, your spread of
sun's laughter
for if the sun could laugh
it would follow me
down this road
where you wave, and wave
blue chicory, white froth
pedestrian
but blue beyond breath
13 Comments:
Hi Firebird!! Chicory and Queen Anne make such a lovely couple! Really beautiful poem, Firebird. I loved "embarrassed by/ your stems and stubs/ like sore elbows" and "tweaking her shoulders/ snorting like a cow..." -- you brought out the personalities in Chicory and Queen Anne in such a lovely way. Have a great weekend!
:)
Clare, you made my day! I was worried that people wouldn't know these flowers --
I'm delighted that you understand so well...
Thanks so much for your wonderful comment!
Oh my yes very good.
A well rattled poem that rolls on but stays on track
the wildness in a baby's eyes
fists dodging the weed-whacker
spread of sun's laughter
are brill phrases.
sorry, but I thought your poem to be such sad. Did I miss the true meaning?
I like, hm, I am used to take american english to be kind of childish - quick, lovely, but never severe or ernest. My fault, I think. Europeans tend to be a bit snotty about the colonies, you know.
Nevertheless - your words did make me sad, very sad.
Mandy--I like your "well-rattled poem" image...it fits so well--
and thanks for commenting on the lines, it means a lot to me!
Susanne--I'm not sure why the poem made you feel sad--it is about things that made me feel sad before, but now I appreciate that they are beautiful--just like life...
The words in this poem are not easy, I admire you for trying to capture the meaning...
Interesting what you say about American English--I try to be earnest in a childlike way, maybe--but it is a disguise...
You're back!! I can see Queen Anne raising her fists at the weed whacker. I normal stick my foot in its destructive twine. Beautiful, beautiful as always!! From your comment on my blog, you're a nurse by day??
Thanks, Pat--I am sorry to be gone so long, actually my job has been crazy lately (Physician Assistant--you were close!) since the doctor I work with is on vacation--
I only get to write in the wee hours when I can't sleep...
Also, I just found out my weekend house in the mountains is one rotten beam away from collapsing--SO, I have a new project: tearing it down and rebuilding my dream house from scratch in a hurry! (it's coming along GREAT, I have a terrific local team, designed it in a week, now we're waiting for town approval. Should be up before it gets too cold, if all goes well!
(I'm actually having fun with this--perhaps I can rewrite Murphy's Law?
Imagery that works, as usual. I still say your consistency is amazing. The themes/execution are consistent. But within that, it's variable - not repetitive.
Thanks, Paul--for being so supportive! I really need to hear if I'm being repetitive--
sometimes I wonder, as there are only so many words and images to use
(or maybe it only seems that way, compared to the infinite variety of God's universe!)
I guess if really thought you were being repetitive I'd answer that with an email! No, I don't.
It's that you write with a certain style and consistently address certain themes - basically love and nature, usually with the two interwoven - that makes what you write very identifiable.
Paul--
I'll take that gratefully as a compliment, and also as a promise that you will give me any criticism without holding back!
I do appreciate your being so kind...
Been missing you.
Hi mb--I miss you too! It's been so hectic, I can't even put pen to paper without falling asleep...
The new house plans have been approved, so now it's a mad rush to pack up and clear out the old house for demolition--move all the garden plants, hopefully to have the new house up before the snows!
I promise to return soon, poems are moving through my brain like clouds on a windy day...
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