Friday, October 12, 2007

creators of flames

your body is perfect in the dark

beneath
that blind overbearing bark
is green tenderness
unscarred

and I sense

in the gentle turbulence
of sleep
the earth's rosin
rising

crevasses widening

as if lightning split
or a match lit
inside the shredded heartwood
dry as tinder

waiting for the crisp wind

of dawn
you and I
creators
of flames

8 Comments:

Blogger Lady Prism said...

wow!

It's been some time since I've read poetry.

What you wrote is so beautiful. I enjoyed it.

Friday, October 12, 2007 at 10:48:00 AM EDT  
Blogger gracie said...

oooh I like it... reading you is an experience every time!

Saturday, October 13, 2007 at 8:47:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Lady L--
I'm so glad you came here on your travels--thanks so much for your lovely comment!
Stop by again any time...

gracie--
Wonderful to see you again--I just LOVE your comment! Thanks for visiting even though I've been away for so long...I appreciate it...

Sunday, October 14, 2007 at 11:15:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Yes ma'am, you are a creator of fire!!! Now I have to go take a shower.

Tuesday, October 16, 2007 at 10:04:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Bird said...

i say again - oh how i wish you published your work out in the world of print.

you have such precision.

i envy your talent.

Wednesday, October 17, 2007 at 12:41:00 AM EDT  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like this poem. Photo too. Nice to see you again.
mb

Wednesday, October 17, 2007 at 11:49:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Pat--Funny how that works...the more fires, the more showers we need--must be a natural phenomenon...

bird--You are so kind...I do hope to be printed someday, but it's been hard to compile a manuscript that holds together as a unit--that seems to be what publishers are looking for...but it will happen, I promise!
Meanwhile you make me very happy with your comment, and certainly you have no reason for envy, with your own precision and quick wit!

mb--I'm glad you didn't give up checking in on me--as busy as you are! I'll try to be more frequent with my posts...thanks...

Friday, October 19, 2007 at 9:25:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

very evocative

Monday, November 12, 2007 at 5:57:00 AM EST  

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