conversation with a Bradford Pear tree
I was not bred
for sadness,
(she said)
so when on that brief day in May
you were afraid
to turn your head
down my alleyway
fearing that the sheer weight of my blossoms
pressing outward into the universe
would overwhelm your heart
I smiled--
so strange you are
your hairs like sweet stamens
catching the sun--I think of petals
as your body unfolds
unthinking as mine does
fresh as the whiteness
that settles like a flock
on my bony twigs
Now, even in brown August
my breath is starry
like yours is, in your lover's eyes
and even now
the storm of my blooming
that pulled you shivering
into its vortex
has not released you
for sadness,
(she said)
so when on that brief day in May
you were afraid
to turn your head
down my alleyway
fearing that the sheer weight of my blossoms
pressing outward into the universe
would overwhelm your heart
I smiled--
so strange you are
your hairs like sweet stamens
catching the sun--I think of petals
as your body unfolds
unthinking as mine does
fresh as the whiteness
that settles like a flock
on my bony twigs
Now, even in brown August
my breath is starry
like yours is, in your lover's eyes
and even now
the storm of my blooming
that pulled you shivering
into its vortex
has not released you
10 Comments:
I've had a few talks with my BP's but never any as beautiful as this. You have such an amzing talent.
Pat--Do you have Bradford Pear trees in your yard?
If so, how lucky you are!
The ones I visit are lined up along the cemeteries and housing projects in the city--quite a fabulous sight every year! (But for an terribly short time)
Thanks for your generous comment--I do appreciate it!
Hi Firebird -- this is so lovely, right from the first lines all the way through. I especially love the lines "I was not bred for sadness" and "my breath is starry". Very nice.
Yes I do, but their shade is killing my grass. Their bloosoms do last too short a time.
Some very good lines in here which stay in mind.
Clare--Thank you so much for your generous comment--it really makes my day! You are so kind...
Pat--I can sympathize with your grass situation--perhaps a ground cover instead? (less to mow)
There are some shade-tolerant grass seed avaiable, also.
Gautami--I appreciate your comment--especially since I have a clue how busy you are! Thanks again...
what a lovely thing to bloom beside a cemetery! Trees speak to me too... this is beautiful, firebird.
Thank you, Gracie--
I'm glad trees speak to you, it's a blessing! The most beautiful sight is these blooming trees all lined up in a row like an endless cloud of white...
I've not visited for awhile and am sorry I haven't - for I've missed out on this. I do so much love your poetry.
And so I have tagged you for 8 random facts about you (in hopes you'll do it poem form).
Bird--Don't feel bad --I've been a stranger here myself lately--
You know I can't resist a challenge--I'll do my best to comply!
(And thanks for thinking of me...)
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