a touch of haiku
tears fall from my eyes--
the sun shining in your smile
creates a rainbow
^ ^ ^ ^
water sinks through stones--
I cannot hold its sweetness
Again, we say goodbye
^ ^ ^ ^
the sun shining in your smile
creates a rainbow
^ ^ ^ ^
water sinks through stones--
I cannot hold its sweetness
Again, we say goodbye
^ ^ ^ ^
posted by Yes at 11:38 PM
8 Comments:
tears-
salty, sour
nector of God
No syllable count here!!
gautami--This is a jewel--
needs no syllable count!
You have a real feel for this type of poetry--
Consider posting this on your blog,
with a title...
(I know you meant to write"nectar")
haiku!
bless you
/t.
Bless you too, /t.
...spoken truly from the heart--and the nose...
A sweet, poignant touch.
Gautami's response says it all.
WOW!! What unique ways to look at breaking up. Publish, publish, publish!!
Thank you, mb--
I agree--
Pat--I love your enthusiasm! Thanks...
"water sinks through stones--i cannot hold its sweetness"
this spoke right to the heart of me and i can't even describe why. it just gave me an immense feeling of joy and sadness all rolled together. thank you for this!
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