Wednesday, January 17, 2007

baby steps to the soul

you have found my fingers

when will you take
my hand

brushing back
the curtains of the night

when will you take
this wind

that whips endless circles
under my feet

the transparent moon
caught in my hair

the light that pulls towards you
from my open fingers

the song that follows
your trail
of notes


Blogger MB said...

I like your choice of photos for this poem — those small particulars, those transparent moon bubbles, a water song that follows a trail... it's a lovely combination.

Thursday, January 18, 2007 at 9:45:00 AM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Sounds to me like "love" needs a nudge. You do have a way with words!!

Thursday, January 18, 2007 at 7:36:00 PM EST  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

I love the title.

Friday, January 19, 2007 at 2:16:00 PM EST  
Blogger firebird said...

mb--It's amazing how you make these connections--I honestly didn't think along those lines, but now that you mention--of course! Thanks for being so perceptive...

pat--Hey, I think you put your finger on it! Your comment is so cute--thanks--

gautami--Thanks so much for appreciating it!

Friday, January 19, 2007 at 3:34:00 PM EST  
Blogger Borut said...

Baby steps... I love it!:)

Saturday, January 20, 2007 at 2:56:00 AM EST  

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