so many ways to stop time
so many ways
to stop time
that trickles down
like water
through a starry colander
onto the inert
snoring earth
upon which we
experiment
chirping a new melody
to the small flock of
molecules
that flutter
in and out of our arms
distracted
from their forward motion
into a swarm
of skittering jewels
to stop time
that trickles down
like water
through a starry colander
onto the inert
snoring earth
upon which we
experiment
chirping a new melody
to the small flock of
molecules
that flutter
in and out of our arms
distracted
from their forward motion
into a swarm
of skittering jewels
9 Comments:
love love love this! the skittering jewels - so mesmerising. time is such a fascinating concept - and always so well spent here at firebird landing!
I wonder what is stopping time for you. Whatever/whoever it sounds good!! As Gracie said, each visit here definitely stops time!!
"to the small flock of
molecules
that flutter
in and out of our arms"
I tried looking at molecules in my hand. I practically visualised it.
Yes, I agree we can stop time!
yes. YES. beautifully written.
gracie--Thank you so much!
What a lovely comment--glad to see you!
pat--I guess love can do it--
but we don't need outside help to do our own experiments, do we?
gautami--I can just imagine you doing that! I'm sure you have that talent...
catnapping--you're welcome to curl up and take a nap here--whenever you want! Thanks for the comment!
You have some alliterative-type things going on, and I like the whole, but if I may daresay:
Snoring?
This word be silly.
Is that a compliment, Percy?
You realize, of course, that "silly" is a necessary ingredient for stopping time...
One word only? That can't be! I could have sworn there were more...
Nay, twas the only silly word.
Another good silly word is "chicken." Perchance one day I shall write of a sonorously snoring chicken who would feign cackle and yet could not...
Perci -- (sigh)--
Ca serait un poeme horrible--
insupportable--
Je t'en prie-
Do not write such a poem...
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