Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Gifts

It was Jupiter's eye
that pierced you, finally

that blue spark,
with a strand of pale moon
pinned in the sky
like the last defiant ice
in a melting sea

and I lay down unseen
watching your heart
drink in

this blue-white fire, a splinter of gold,
the blazing hush of night sky

gifts
to break you open

I know how long to wait
before I brush an orange cloud
against your throat
and touch you with
the rush of seagulls' black-tipped wings

you sigh,
"nothing could ever be so beautiful"

and you are saying this, to me only
as I turn the sun loose for you
in the fierce wild light of January

igniting the frost
and you cry out

"nothing could ever be so beautiful"
as you look down, dazzled
by the crystalline grace
of a frozen spot of spit
under your feet
a gem

for love's eyes only

8 Comments:

Blogger Lorraine said...

these eyes have seen a lot of Love, but never in words, oh dear dear woman

Sunday, January 29, 2012 at 7:30:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Lorraine--And I hope you see much much more love, may it flood your existence, as you are so lovely inside and out! Thanks for being such a wonderful friend!

Monday, January 30, 2012 at 8:47:00 PM EST  
Blogger Lorraine said...

no, thank you Vivian you soothe my heart so often

Tuesday, January 31, 2012 at 7:29:00 AM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Vivian your words are warm as a dryer fresh blanket on a cold February morning. Hope all is well with you.

Saturday, February 11, 2012 at 9:27:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Lorraine--as you do mine...and don't we need it!

Pat--I am jumping for joy to see you back--and a very snuggly visit it is! Yes, all is well with me--and how about you? You had better be back on your blog--I'm going there to check it out!

Sunday, February 12, 2012 at 11:17:00 PM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Thanks for coming by. I didn't mean to post it yet. I meant to save it to draft.It needs tweaking. NAKED always work!

Monday, February 13, 2012 at 5:55:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

Pat--It may need "tweaking", but I LIKE IT just like it is!
(naked or not)

Monday, February 13, 2012 at 11:43:00 PM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Thank you. I tweaked it. How's the Winter been up there?Been unseasonably warm here. I love it!

Tuesday, February 14, 2012 at 9:50:00 AM EST  

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