rose opens and falls
rose opens and falls
there is no holding
the air between petals
egg shivers
there is no holding
the feet, the tiny beak
rain specks the window
there is no holding the flow
from open eyes
no holding the universe
no holding the rose
from falling
there is no holding
the air between petals
egg shivers
there is no holding
the feet, the tiny beak
rain specks the window
there is no holding the flow
from open eyes
no holding the universe
no holding the rose
from falling
posted by Yes at 1:54 AM
12 Comments:
there is no holding....
i felt everything drop away as i read this. very beautiful. thank you!
yes... another challenge to trust and let go... that all that is not held is not lost.
What will be, will be. "...there is no holding the air between petals" great lines!!
ss--I hope that was a good feeling--I meant it to be...
gracie--Yours is a very wise comment...
pat--It's great to get your positive feedback on that line, I had been unsure about changing it...thanks!
lovely!
"no holding the air between the petals"
No holding back in my praise!
I love this!
gel--thanks so much for visiting--your comment is very appreciated!
And I'm glad you and pat like that line...it makes a difference!
gautami tripathy--such a sweet generous comment from you! Thank you...
Coming here, squinting in the darkness as I do, your beautiful words and images feel like a sanctuary. Thank you.
mb--I'm glad you feel that way when you visit, thanks for the lovely comment...
of course, we can always travel to a world of sheer brightness and space in YOUR blog, just with a mouse click!
a poignant example on how to let go; be free, be secure in what we are...lovely piece, I shall return.
sage
sage--Thank you so much for your eloquent comment, you're welcome to return here any time!
thank you firebird,
I shall return often...please do the same at my place.
Merry Christmas!
sage
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