space
soft wind blowing
from your eyes
pulls me
into your heartbeat
into the silence
between steps
the empty cry
of space
where things small
and familiar
melt
forever changed
from your eyes
pulls me
into your heartbeat
into the silence
between steps
the empty cry
of space
where things small
and familiar
melt
forever changed
posted by Yes at 2:37 AM
5 Comments:
Two meld into one. Excellent poem!!
pat--That's how it goes...nice comment, thanks!
Your words suggest something so ethereal and elusive, yet strong and passionate at the same time. Paradoxical? Not at all. ;-)
into the silence
between steps
Quite a moving observation on the reach of emotion -- even into things not readily noticeable. ^_^
I do enjoy reading your poetry, especially with respect to the delicate motion in the scenes portrayed. I especially adore "Creature From a Star" and "If I Were Wild."
Cheers.
mb--I think you are right, I believe that sometimes our feelings are the strongest and most rooted things in the universe!
soulless--I'm so happy you came and left me such a beautiful comment! Welcome and thank you so much...
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