Saturday, October 02, 2010

understand the night

understand the night
stand under it
as if it were your soul
poured over you

understand the night's design
the beat and hush
of great wings opening

the moon is dark
by whose light
do you catch
the glow
in its hollows and crevices

stand under it
as if it were your soul
poured over you

9 Comments:

Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Not very hard to understand, after such a beautiful poem, my dear bird :)

The best thing about this poem is enlivens our soul, more than anything else -- beautiful, as always...and the message, to understand, one must stand under...submit one self :)

wishes,
devika

Sunday, October 3, 2010 at 8:53:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--wow, I am overwhelmed by the way you have cut to the heart of the poem--more clearly than I had even been aware of myself!
Thanks for the gift of your perception, and your willingness to share it!

Sunday, October 3, 2010 at 9:58:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Don't tell me that, my dear :)

btw, i have a reference to your poem at my blog on today's post -- Hope you don't mind me doing that :)

wishes,
devika

Monday, October 4, 2010 at 12:33:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika--I'm so honored that you put a reference to my poem on your blog--thanks!

Monday, October 4, 2010 at 5:42:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

oh no, it's my honour, dear...thanks :)

devika

Monday, October 4, 2010 at 11:25:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Hayden said...

Lovely. Beat and hush of great wings brought Great Horned Owl to me, that sentinel of night and Wisdom, which is light....

Wednesday, October 6, 2010 at 12:52:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Thank you, Hayden, for bringing the great owl to life!
I have a very small owl as a helper, but he can bring his friends when needed...

Monday, October 11, 2010 at 2:17:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Lorraine said...

I will. I have to. Thanks m'dear

Monday, November 1, 2010 at 7:57:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Hayden--my little owl helper grew up, now he has a great wingspan!

Lorraine--Thanks, I know you will, you are deeply perceptive.

Monday, November 1, 2010 at 3:12:00 PM EDT  

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