it's not that I need you
it's only that
you own the air
and the far violet rim
of the earth
is yours
and the sudden forest
blooming
when you brush past me
here, where I'm showing you
it's only that
my heart
beats to the rhythm of wings
in your air
it's not
that I need you
you own the air
and the far violet rim
of the earth
is yours
and the sudden forest
blooming
when you brush past me
here, where I'm showing you
it's only that
my heart
beats to the rhythm of wings
in your air
it's not
that I need you
posted by Yes at 1:07 AM
11 Comments:
i was just thinking of you this morning...and then i thought i'll be here for a knock by evening :)
about the poem - i need sunshine, all the way :)
But your poem is exquisite, my dear...the soft rhythm of your words --i love it :)
wishes,
devika
Devika--funny you should mention sunshine--I am working on a poem about the sun, but it's not ready yet--
love your comment!
oh! i think its a chemistry!:)
just look forward for the poem, my dear :)
devika
As always your poetry lifts me to the soft bellies of the clouds.
Devika--yes, I think so too! Hope it is not too long a wait...
Pat--Oh, you remember, then? Such a treat to have you back, hope you do not flit away again too soon--
I can't say I've all the time in the world...but i think its never too late for a poem, from you, my dear :)
btw, I am off from blogging again...but as always will be among the first to read you,
love
devika
nope don't need a thing, just breathing... so beautiful :)
*******sighing with contentment*******
Devika--enjoy your time off--see you soon!
Lorraine--I think you've got it! And your self-portraits get prettier all the time...
Hayden--I can just hear the gentle sound--may it stay!
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thanks for your poem i like it. I can't work out how to follow your blog. Anyway, good luck to you
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