Monday, October 13, 2008

beloved moon

beloved moon
you rode behind horses
tonight

that scattered away
like the clouds they were

casting away their reins

and for me, your face of clay
rose

beloved moon,
stone among many
wandering

tonight the veil
dissolves

your eyes are windows

and do you reach into mine
for another taste
of light

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

That works...

I especially like "the taste of light" image.

Tuesday, October 14, 2008 at 8:56:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Thanks, Paul--I like that line too--
always happy to have your comments!

Tuesday, October 14, 2008 at 9:23:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

"do you reach into mine
for another taste
of light"

How I wished if i were a splinter of moon!

lovely verse, Firebird!

Wishes!
devika

Wednesday, October 15, 2008 at 12:44:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Devika-- Your comments are so inspiring! I am so happy we can reach each other through the Internet--like from across the sky...

Wednesday, October 15, 2008 at 10:59:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Yeas firebird, I too so much cherish this friendship firebird..

just so, out of the blue skies we met..i felt so..when I had your message..after I dropped in at yours, without ou knowing..i see so much of *Providence* there, Firebird...

Wishes!
devika

Thursday, October 16, 2008 at 3:27:00 AM EDT  

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