who are you, rain
who are you,
mockingbird
that you bare your throat
to the sky
shaking down lute notes
from your feathers
and who are you,
rain
that you draw the scorched taste
from my mouth
with your million fingers
circling my soul
and who are you, forest sparrows
that you cry out in harmony
with each other's song
from opposite stars
and wood thrush, that you open the night's eyes
with your whisper
of glass
and who are you, night
that you rake away the weight
of a tired world
and you, earth,
who are you
to bleed, in spite of yourself
a soft green haze
as you dream
mockingbird
that you bare your throat
to the sky
shaking down lute notes
from your feathers
and who are you,
rain
that you draw the scorched taste
from my mouth
with your million fingers
circling my soul
and who are you, forest sparrows
that you cry out in harmony
with each other's song
from opposite stars
and wood thrush, that you open the night's eyes
with your whisper
of glass
and who are you, night
that you rake away the weight
of a tired world
and you, earth,
who are you
to bleed, in spite of yourself
a soft green haze
as you dream
10 Comments:
and who are you
firebird
that you charm a downcast
with a glowing kind mind
and a verse that recognises
natures’ holdings made
to cheer!
it made me so light!!
thank you firebird..
see you and take care:-)
Devika-- No-one can be downcast with a friend like you! I am glad this poem lifts your spirit...your comment lifts mine!
that was so kind of you firebird...
i am glad that I have been blessed to have friends like you..:-)
devika
'A Certain Kind of Woman' has a new one..would love to have your comments...
To me, what starts as a response to a mockingbird ends up pointing to the depth of our overall responsiveness to nature. Reminds me of these lines from GM Hopkins:
...the soil
Is bare now, nor can foot feel,
Being shod. (He's just discussed the blighting influence human activities can have on nature...)
And for all this, nature is never spent,
There lives the dearest freshness deep down things;
And though the last lights off the black West went, O morning at the brown brink eastwards springs -
Because the Holy Ghost over the bent world
Broods with warm breast and with Ah! - bright wings."
Paul's comment was just so revealing...
I like to see these sparks when great minds meet..:-)
see you again..
devika
Do we really know who they are? Do we know who we are?
Paul--what a wonderful comment--I love those lines that you quoted--
they give me the same deep feeling...
(I was trying for William Blake, but GMH does it for me, too!)
Thanks for "getting" it!
(funny how Hopkins' poem ends with a bird image...)
Devika--"great minds", Hmm? You won't get any argument from me about that! You are so amusing...
Gautami--Some things we wonder about, but never know, we just feel...
I like your comment!
Hi Firebird!
You know me by now Firebird... That was not for an argument, I really felt so...
Wishes!
devika
PS: 'Socio-Political Onlooker' has a new one today. It may interest you, i feel..
Devika--you know me by now, too--I was just teasing you!
Loved your new post but didn't have time to comment on it last night...
I know firebird, teasing bird?
lovingly,
devika
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