Monday, January 01, 2007

the road home

when I laughed
and the wind blew you upward
out of your shoes

when you turned
surprised by the flicker
of a falling twig

by the soft notes of a river

when your feet
suddenly bare
touched the grass

why were you ashamed
of not knowing
that the road home

is just a turn of the head


Blogger Rethabile said...

This is very cool. Enjoyed it.

Monday, January 1, 2007 at 5:10:00 AM EST  
Blogger MB said...

This is delightful, passionate, whimsical, yet very practical, open... wonderful. And very much you. What a great note to start the new year with! I'm so glad I get to read your poems, Firebird. Thanks.

Monday, January 1, 2007 at 2:31:00 PM EST  
Blogger firebird said...

rethabile--I so much appreciate your visiting and leaving your generous comment!

I purchased a World Atlas this weekend, as I am too ignorant of geography--today I am one country richer--having learned of Lesotho! It seems to be a place well worth getting to is your African poetry community.

Please come and visit again any time!

Monday, January 1, 2007 at 5:19:00 PM EST  
Blogger firebird said...

mb--I am bowled over by your stunning adjectives, they truly touch my heart! Thank you so much for getting MY new year started on a happy note!
Friends like you are priceless...

(and you would notice the practical side of the poem--yes, it was meant that way)

Monday, January 1, 2007 at 5:25:00 PM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I love that ending!!! Sometimes the simplest answers can be the hardest to find.

Monday, January 1, 2007 at 6:04:00 PM EST  
Blogger gracie said...

You had me from the first line.. reading with great anticipation of the resolution... the 'why' took me by surprise but I loved it! I like the way you make me think...

Tuesday, January 2, 2007 at 6:01:00 AM EST  
Blogger firebird said...

pat--Thanks, this is so true!
Sometimes we're lucky and the answers find you...

gracie--So good to see you again in the new year--hope it is the best ever for you!
Really love your comment...thanks for understnding!

Tuesday, January 2, 2007 at 11:38:00 AM EST  
Blogger snowsparkle said...

i can't even find the words to express how this one touched me... i continue to be in awe and grateful for your poetry here. thank you once again!

Wednesday, January 3, 2007 at 12:01:00 AM EST  
Blogger firebird said...

ss--your words are always sparkling and eloquent--
Thanks for taking the time to stop here, in your busy life!

Saturday, January 6, 2007 at 8:38:00 PM EST  
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