Sunday, October 22, 2006

guardians

I did not summon you
but you rode up with me
from sleep

what danger
am I waking to
that guardians appear

armed with the winds power
and the desert's silence

companions
brown as dunes
protect my wandering steps

as my scarred heart
walks the plank
of morning

6 Comments:

Blogger mermaid said...

I can't explain why this is one of my favorites. Perhaps it is because the image of guardians from sand and wind conjures the potency of one's dreams. Some dreams leave us defenseless against morning.

And yet, you were defended (or maybe they are images you made to defend yourself).

Sunday, October 22, 2006 at 12:57:00 PM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

Thank you , mermaid--sometimes we get strength when we need it--this was an unexpected gift.

My dreams most often leave me defenseless, but that seems to be changing now...

I love your comment!

Sunday, October 22, 2006 at 5:04:00 PM EDT  
Blogger MB said...

Many times I've been unable to shake the "feel" of a dream upon waking. This poem gives the sense of the border between sleep and waking life being thin, perhaps purposefully so. Very interesting!

Sunday, October 22, 2006 at 10:54:00 PM EDT  
Blogger mermaid said...

Firebird, me, too:)

Mb, I like the notion of a thin line.

Monday, October 23, 2006 at 2:53:00 PM EDT  
Blogger snowsparkle said...

"as my scarred heart
walks the plank
of morning"

may the scarred become a path to the sacred. the feelings expressed here are shared among a constellation of women. thanks for giving us such a beautiful voice.

Tuesday, October 24, 2006 at 1:21:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

mb--yes, sometimes things that happen on that "border" have a reality all ther own, and for a purpose, as you say...

ss--"may the scarred be a path to the sacred"--what a beautiful line of thought!

mermaid--it's funny how we have to learn how to defend ourselves from the most basic things--but I guess that's one of life's tasks--

Tuesday, October 24, 2006 at 7:17:00 AM EDT  

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