Friday, August 25, 2006

bones of the sun

after your thrashing heart
overflows

when the pain slices your chest
like a shark's tail through coral

and the cut edges of your flesh
fray in the waves

after the dark tide
grates and spits and stalks away

wafers of pearl
whisper underfoot in the sand

bones of the sun
standing when your blood falls

4 Comments:

Blogger MB said...

wafers of pearl
whisper underfoot in the sand


That, in this context, has got to be one of the most poignant lines.

Friday, August 25, 2006 at 1:39:00 PM EDT  
Blogger mermaid said...

Very visceral and visual, and healing.

Friday, August 25, 2006 at 6:52:00 PM EDT  
Blogger snowsparkle said...

your imagery astounds me... each time i read your words, i'm transported. wow, and well, just... wow! thank you!

Saturday, August 26, 2006 at 1:36:00 AM EDT  
Blogger Yes said...

You honor me with your comments...

mb, thank you for responding to that line...

mermaid, I love the words you use, that is exactly what I was trying for! Thanks for coming by.

snowsparkle, you make it all worthwhile!

Saturday, August 26, 2006 at 2:27:00 PM EDT  

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