bones of the sun
after your thrashing heart
overflows
when the pain slices your chest
like a shark's tail through coral
and the cut edges of your flesh
fray in the waves
after the dark tide
grates and spits and stalks away
wafers of pearl
whisper underfoot in the sand
bones of the sun
standing when your blood falls
overflows
when the pain slices your chest
like a shark's tail through coral
and the cut edges of your flesh
fray in the waves
after the dark tide
grates and spits and stalks away
wafers of pearl
whisper underfoot in the sand
bones of the sun
standing when your blood falls
4 Comments:
wafers of pearl
whisper underfoot in the sand
That, in this context, has got to be one of the most poignant lines.
Very visceral and visual, and healing.
your imagery astounds me... each time i read your words, i'm transported. wow, and well, just... wow! thank you!
You honor me with your comments...
mb, thank you for responding to that line...
mermaid, I love the words you use, that is exactly what I was trying for! Thanks for coming by.
snowsparkle, you make it all worthwhile!
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