Monday, November 13, 2006

creature from a star

you came

to crack my shell
tap my blood

pierce my heart
too long not bleeding

draw me out
in sweet salt drops

bend my sleep
share my skin

4 Comments:

Blogger MB said...

bend my sleep
share my skin


Such interesting images of intimacy in this one. Beautiful as always, Firebird.

Monday, November 13, 2006 at 12:47:00 PM EST  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

From "you came" to "share my skin" fantastically, wonderful poetry!!

Tuesday, November 14, 2006 at 3:17:00 PM EST  
Blogger gracie said...

your blog gets more beautiful and more inspiring every day, firebird... for some reason my bloglines has missed it lately :( but I'm back to enjoy :)

Wednesday, November 15, 2006 at 7:18:00 AM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

mb, pat, gracie--
Your comments mean so much to me--
they make me feel that not only writing, but life, is worth it!
Thanks...

Thursday, November 16, 2006 at 12:49:00 PM EST  

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