Sunday, October 29, 2006

this side of a dream

sounds of the rainforest
flowing down bricks

sweet vibrations
of your sleep

clouds that settle
on our skin

nothing is in focus
but your touch

like a leaf's green edge
reaching through the mist

4 Comments:

Blogger snowsparkle said...

this is so gentle and lovely. thank you!

Sunday, October 29, 2006 at 3:43:00 PM EST  
Blogger MB said...

Oh those last two stanzas are just exquisite. The photos, so sweet and delicate, are wonderful illustrations for this.

Sunday, October 29, 2006 at 4:27:00 PM EST  
Blogger mermaid said...

I want to wrap myself in this while sipping sweet cocoa, but it evaporates into the darkness.

Still, I can see it while I drift off to sleep.

Monday, October 30, 2006 at 9:16:00 PM EST  
Blogger Yes said...

ss: why, thank YOU for coming to read it!

mb: thanks--I was hoping you would feel the photos were appropriate...

mermaid: it is definitely ok to wrap yourself in the poem, that's what it's for!

Wednesday, November 1, 2006 at 1:14:00 AM EST  

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