when you look at me
when you look at me
my heart spills like a wineglass
falling into snow
when you look at me
rosepetals drift like seabirds
into April air
when you look at me
my eyes waver, butterflies
in pools of sunshine
my heart spills like a wineglass
falling into snow
when you look at me
rosepetals drift like seabirds
into April air
when you look at me
my eyes waver, butterflies
in pools of sunshine
posted by Yes at 12:33 AM
6 Comments:
"wineglass falling into snow"
"butterflies in pools of sunshine"
Lovely. So very lovely.
These images capture a feeling. They evoke a feeling. Or rather The Feeling. Their power to manifest that feeling in the reader makes them magic. Once again, lovely poem.
You have a rare talent for being both evocative and precise, in all your comments. They are as beautiful as poems in themselves! I truly mean that.
Thank you.
You can WRITE!!! It makes me marvel. What more can I say?
thanks :-)
A happy thank you to Tomscot for showing me you can make several haikus into one poem (he invented it, not knowing it was already a tradition)--
And appreciation to MB for telling me the name of this form: a "haiku chain".
Nicely done, Firebird. You are off to a roaring start with your blog!
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